
As someone who has a fairly good memory when it comes to what I read, I picked up on added phrases to conversations right away.

For continuity purposes, that's annoying. Another issue I had, was the adding things to "scenes" that weren't in A Touch of Darkness. I ended up skimming to scenes that were new. but wow, reading scene for scene the same thing, was boring. Which, *HAHA*, I knew going into it, it was. My main problem with this book was that is was A Touch of Darkness from Hade's POV. Why is the only good thing about these books, that are soooooo hyped up, that I can come up with is "I didn't hate it." Ugh. When I saw that there was a Hade's POV, my hope was that it would make me like A Touch of Darkness more. Typically, I enjoy switching POV's, It can be interesting to see a situation through another characters eyes, and it intensifies the romance when you experience it from both characters.

I'm not planning on getting too deep into this.
